this is actually a terrible pic of the painting, especially because the pizza box it is taped to is showing, but here it is. I like the mountains and the sky, but i can't seem to get the trees quite right. you should also note that it is not completely finished, so there are some white spaces and pencil marks still showing. also i have to try to finish the white fence on the left side. i am having trouble with that too. if anyone has any suggestions, feel free.
First off, the mountains look awsome! Second, the trees are too straight, most trees either have a branch extending somewhere or some bumps in the trunk. Also, you might want to have more shadowing were the the leaves cover/shade part of the tree, also the leave on the bottom of the tree need to be darker than the leaves on top. Third, the road needs to fade in color as it gets further away. Hope this helps, I had my mom give some input.
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thanks... i didn't even think of the fading in the road... duh i knew that. i have been looking up stuff on how to paint trees online too, and i hope i can make it better. I will post the new one up once i fix the mistakes.
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Second, the trees are too straight, most trees either have a branch extending somewhere or some bumps in the trunk. Also, you might want to have more shadowing were the the leaves cover/shade part of the tree, also the leave on the bottom of the tree need to be darker than the leaves on top.
Third, the road needs to fade in color as it gets further away. Hope this helps, I had my mom give some input.
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Don't wish them any harm, just wish what they deserve.
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Don't wish them any harm, just wish what they deserve.
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